Writing Sample Term 2 2014
28 May
My Favourite Person In The World
My baby brother Luqman is as cute as a baby kitten. When he smiles two cute dimples pop out. The hair on his head is as soft as fur on a polar bear. His big dark brown eyes are the same as mine. His skin is whitish brown. When he looks at me he has a big smile across his face. He wears his lightning Mcqueen shoes on his tiny feet. His clothes are so tiny.
Luqman is a kind, friendly, Playful, funny baby. His laugh is so addictive and I can’t resist hearing it. My brother laughs When he wakes up in the morning he is a little bit moody and he just he wants mummy! OHH!. But when I go to school he just wants me! YAA!.
Whenever I’m sad he will come and cuddle me and hug me and sometimes he kisses me on the cheek. Bed time is the best! he comes with my dad and tucks me in hugs me and kisses me on the cheek says When I come from school he runs to me and hugs me. As soon as we get home he pulls me and says “ Play with me! apa play with me! ”
By Jumaanah
This is my writing about my favourite person in the world.
Awesome peice of writing! I loved it and your baby brother sounds so so cute. I loved it when you said That when he wake's up he want's your mother and when your at school he want's you, same with my baby brother. Please keep sending writing about people you love.
ReplyDeleteYour bother is so small ha gets big every time I like how you have put a photo in my mine he sound cute and my smaller sister only 2 weeks.
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