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Thursday, 18 September 2014

Thank You

Thank You Mt Roskill Intermediate
Thank you for inviting us to watch your play,
I really enjoyed it,
My favourite part was the start when Mavis kept interrupting the person who was introducing the show,  
It was really funny,
The light up costumes were awesome,
I remember how Wally was scared of the people wearing the costumes,
The stage looked like the Old Grand Theatre, it was beautiful.
The singing was very nice.
I loved the show it was great,
Thanks for inviting us I really appreciate it.


From: Jumaanah .V. May Road School
Please invite us for your next production.

Friday, 12 September 2014

Cross Country

Cross Country


On a warm morning I was sleeping under my warm blankets.   
BEEP! BEEP!
“Morning already” I moaned
“ Mum can I sleep in 5 more minutes or can I make that 10 more minutes”    
“ No you need to wake up right now because today is cross country and you don’t want to be late for that do you?”
“ Oh right I will”
Soon I was having breakfast. I had Weetbix. It was yummy. I filled my water bottle with fresh cold water. I packed my delicious lunch that my mum made for me in my school bag.


I looked at the clock.
“ WWWHHHAAATTT! It’s 8:40 already hurry up we need to get to school”.
Everybody got in the car. We sped off. When we arrived at school I went to islamic class. After that Mrs Mellick took the roll. “ 2 lines outside please” It’s time! my heart started pounding. Boom! Boom! Boom! We sat outside under the shelter. Soon everybody was cheering and shouting. The juniors went first. I never realized that it was my turn to race. I was competing in the year 5 girls race we had to run 2 blocks out of school and 1 lap of the court. I trained hard. Bang! we ran. When I passed Miss Percy I ran faster. When I was running uphill. I passed a lot of people. I looked forward and saw Fardosa, Tina and Nejwa right in the front.   
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When I went around the corner I saw my mum and dad and brother cheering me on. “ GO JUMAANAH GO!” I ran even faster. I reached the finish line. I came 6th place.


I felt really proud that I participated in cross country. It was fun. I can’t wait till next year. JPEG Image

By Jumaanah

Thursday, 4 September 2014

Snow White And The 7 Dwarfs Remake



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Snow White And The Candy Apple Factory


On a hot summers afternoon Snow White opened a candy apple factory. The 7 dwarfs kindly offered if they could work in the factory.
Grumpy said “I will clean the place up with an angry attitude”.
Snow White told the rest of the dwarfs to make sweet crunchy candy apples. With a click of her fingers the 7 dwarfs got to work. Soon the place was full of noises.


“ GRINDING GRINDING, ZZZZZZZZZ!, BANG BANG BANG…”  


Outside the factory the wicked witch of the west was listening.


“ She can’t have it all she said with a cruel voice.  I should be in there munching on candy apples and I should be the queen of the candy apple factory. The dwarfs should feed me with truckloads of candy apples a day. There is only one thing standing in my way and that is the ugly Snow White. I have to get rid of her some how” she wondered.  I know just what to do
Hahahahaha”(evil laugh).


She dressed up in a beautiful dress ready to work in the candy apple factory. She knocked on the door. Knock, Knockerty,Knock knock. Snow white opened the door and saw her.
“ Hello how may I help you” Snow White said with a sweet voice.
“ I would like a job please”
“ Oh sure there’s plenty of place for you”
“ you can help doc make the candy apples”.


The wicked witch of the west came in. She made a poisonous candy apple for snow white.
“ Oh Snow White will you taste my first candy apple”.
“ Oh no you should try it because you made it” said snow white gracefully.
The Wicked Witch Of The West forgot that she put poison in it because she was so happy that snow white offered her something. She took one bite and…
Just like that she had an heart attack. Snow White was acting innocent because she knew that the Wicked Witch Of The West put poison in the apple. Snow White wanted to kill her anyway.
THE END                  

In Room 15 we had to write a story about snow white in a factory and somebody had to have a heart attack in the story. I think my story is funny.
Why  I Think You Should Come To School


Theres a girl in our class who is certain to pass,
for she’s the cleverest girl in our class,
there's a girl in our class 
who has only to look a minute or two... 
at an exercise book.
Yes! she’s certain to pass,
for she’s the cleverest girl in our class.


Now why do you think that this is the case
this girl in our class who’s always first place?
Well maybe she came to school with a positive behavior for learning, read all her books and did all her homework.


So all you children who sit at home and don’t want to come to school here’s a piece of my mind to make you change your mind about coming to school.


I strongly believe everybody should come to school everyday because…


At school, we learn to read, write and do maths and more.
Imagine if you didn't know how to read a very important sign? You’ll struggle and find it difficult. You’ll think “ oh why didn’t I go to school I would have learnt how to read!”. You do not want to think that do you? You’d  want to think “oh thank goodness I went to school I learnt how to read”.
Maths will help you work out how much change you need to get when you buy something and it will help you do other things too! Learning how to write is great because you can make the world a better place just by writing interesting stories.


Have you ever dreamt about getting a good job like an  air hostess or a doctor or even a scientist ?
If you come to school you will be able to become what you want to be when you grow up. Nelson Mandela also said “Education is the most powerful weapon we can use to change the world.” School will take you on a trip around the big world of knowledge. This trip will help you make your dreams come true. Just imagine if you sat at home the whole day doing absolutely nothing , you don’t want to be like that.


All those children who think school is boring, dull and uninteresting you will have less advantages than the children who come to school.
Look at it this way!
Everyone in this world have different learning abilities. Some of us learn by listening, others learn by watching, and a few might learn hands on. There are also fast learners and slow learners. But being slow doesn't mean you should be discouraged.  The child who’s interested in coming to school will have more chances in life, but those who choose that school is not for them won’t be able to help his or herself or others.


Everybody has a right to have an education so you should use that chance to make a successful life. Parents! remember that the best gift you could ever give your child in life is education. School is the basic foundation of knowledge. So come to school to have a better future.


Thank You !


By: Jumaanah .V.      

I wrote a speech for the speech competition. I made it in the class speech finals but I did not go to the speech finals.       

My Burma Trail Poem From Camp

Burma Trail


Dark!
Scary!
Going through the forest.
Never knowing what's around the corner.
It might be a monster Screenshot 2014-04-16 at 07.20.58.png

or a big hairy bear.
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People in front screaming and shouting, making me scared.
Looking around, up and down, making sure no ones around.
Listening to the howling wind and creepy sounds making me want to run away.
I’m never going back in the dark again!


Jumaanah Vahora
Room 15
May Road School

At Camp we had to walk though a forest in the dark following a piece of string. It was really scary.

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